self reflection - progression

First day back from half term, I have started to develop the script. I have fleshed out my characters and motivations as well as character and narrative arcs. I have also  used a screen writing workshop online to create more depth with my scrip. This work shop allowed me to give a personal response to a series of questions which i later used to incorporate with my protagonist Francias. 

One of the major developments that occurred today was the change in the genre of my film. Initially i intended for slow paced poetic short film that explored girlhood. However, pulling influence from Jean Luc Godard's film ; one or two things i know about her the narrative structure of my film/ display has changed. I think i will be implemented dialogue in the form of a monologue type of piece or maybe read out my script, this it will be accompanied with the visuals i'll be shooting. I think this development has as i was exploring different ways to present my film to the viewer in a non - conventional way.

I have also looked into books including Sylvia Plath - The Bell Jar.- important book fro me to read  

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